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aka Jordan

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April 12, 2012
  • I live in Australia
  • I was born on August 20
  • My occupation is Fan Fiction Writer, Student
  • I am Male
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  • Hey :) Just thought i'd drop by and give you a list of things that need to be updated on the "Season One" page.

    You need more  numbers  onto character appearences.

    You need to create  banners for the last two episodes, and add them to the page, and the seperate episode pages.

    You need to add the plot summaries for "Almost There", "We're Here!", "Christmas Time Is Here", "Promalicious", and "If We Ever Meet Again", onto the page and they're seperate episode pages.

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    • I'm really excited for the new fic too..but i just wish i could get my words out.

      Lol. She'll definetley not become Tina. The plan is for the importance of characters, whether regular or recurring, to alternate each you get a look in at each character. :)

      Wow. That's far away.

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    • Yeah, I always find I have great ideas, but writing it down is the hardest part.

      That's great! That sounds like a really good plan, I'm trying something similar with season two of my fic, to focus on particular characters each episode and alternate.

      Well, it's only about a month, but I know what you mean. :P

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  • Hiya, Jordan! Just dropping by to let you know the first episode of my fanfic has just aired. You can check it out here  :)(:

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    • WOW, that was an amazing episode! Commented on the  blog post, so if you want to see a more detailed opinion my comment is there. You have a heap of talent, Narise!! :) Loved it

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  • Hey :) I love your new profile pic, who are the two or is one of them (the male obvs) you?

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    • I'm not sure, for some reason, I thought it'd be every day.

      Yeah, it's like that here in Australia too. None of our colleges, etc. are stay overnight programs, unless they're boarding schools (obvs.) How is the grading organized at your schools in England? In Australia, we have primary school (kindergarten to grade 6 or 7 - can depend), and then high school is years 7/8 to year 12. I'm guessing it's probably similar, as Australia is a Commonwealth and has been run similarly to England in terms of government, although, we only have a prime minister, no monarchs.

      I don't think rushing the eps will be an issue. I'm kind of a perfectionist. I hate posting my eps if they aren't as good as I can make them. I know my writing isn't always brilliant, and I think that's because I kinda don't always have fully planned ideas, and sometimes I'm making things up as I go along, but honestly, I can't see myself rushing ahead being too big of an issue, because as I do like things to be the best they can be, which obviously means I take quite a while to get eps posted.

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    • No. It's a part-time course, apparently. But then again, i heard my art tutor say it was a full-time course but i think it's only 3 days, due to budget cuts, because i've heard it used to be more :)

      I really don't know the grades for Kindergarten as i've not got my thinking cap on. But at Secondary school, you're year 7 up into year 11. :)

      That is very true :) I'm really nervous about my episodes, as i really wanna start writing, but i don't wanna (if that makes sense) Because i know they're be parts which won't have any sense or i change along the way.

      You know, when you have a plot planned and then you cut it, that's what i mean :)

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  • Hey :) I'd just like to say i loved Prim and she's accepted. I know who her friend is....Siobhan a.k.a Devonne :)

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    • Thank you Jack! You're so kind! That sounds great, I'm really excited for the new series. :)

      Btw, ep 1 will be posted on Sunday 25th August. Sorry for the delays, when I planned the release date, I suppose I never thought my birthday would be so busy that i wouldn't have time to post it.

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    • You're welcome. Me too, i've not got anything written but i've got stuff planned, so..i'm good.

      Ok cool :) I'm so excited. I hope you're episodes will be more spaced out though, will they?

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  • Hey :)

    Since my fan-fic cancelled. If there's any questions you'd like to ask about how some things were planned to end or what might of become of a certain storyline, you can ask (it's dependent on whether i can fully answer, because some things will be used in the new fic) but go ahead anyway.

    For example: How would the Walker/ Beth storyline have ended up?

    My reply would be: Beth would be empowered by this, but underneath heartbroken about it. Aurora would convince her to move on to someone else, seeing as theirs’s a wide range of available guys. But Beth would realise Walker's the only one for her and get back to get together with him, setting some conditions first. He would eventually get too comfortable in the relationship, and to lay on his anger about being beat up by jocks, he'd end up beating Beth, to feel in control. You'd also of learned as a kid, he use to suffer from anorexia and he was going to have a bond with Melinda, who was going to find out about what he's doing to Beth and not liking it. She’d try and make Beth see it was wrong. After a long time, she decides enough is enough and breaks up with Walker and ends up moving with her sister, Aurora to a different state where her grandparents live...they would have been happy since her mother was having a baby.

    Then despite what she knows, Melinda would grow close to Walker and you'd expect them to be a couple but you'd be treated to a scene in the far future. It would be an older Walker (about 50) in bed, suffering from cancer (you'd learn it to be common in his family) and a married Beth would come to his beside and tell him that despite his actions to her in the past, he was the one who made her know what love was...because it was never a big thing for her, with any others before him. She'd kiss him and Walker would say, that he loves her and that he's sorry for abusing her, but not sorry for knowing her. He would say that he's not afraid of dying as he's a champion, he won her love. He might of not won her but he won her love :)

    Then he'd died and she'd cry into his chest, and say, "You're beautiful (a call-back to his first solo to her). Then like she hadn't realized, her last words would be "You're gone"

    P.S. I asked Narise a while back if i could use Winter Delgado for S2 and she said yes, so i'm using her for my new fic instead. Don't worry though, she'll be different than the Unitards counterpart :)

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    • Well, you certaintly did a goob job at hiding that intention, that's for sure. :P

      That's really sweet, and a nice little story for Demetria, Spencer and her father. Btw, does Spencer's dad have a name, and if so, what was it? I think you might have mentioned it as Anthony or Andrew or something?

      That sounds really good. How would Spencer go in NY? Would she be accepted into NYADA?

      I thought Spencer might have been bisexual. I'm not sure why, but a lot of the time, I pictured her as bi. Devonne is a bit of a shock, but not completely unrealistic or unworkable.

      I kind of do agree a little with the fact that you threw the anorexia story in a bit early. I feel in the new fic, it'd be a little better if we got to know Melinda's character (obviously with a different name though) better before the anorexia plot pops up.

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    • Lol.

      His name's Anthony.

      Yes, she would be accepted into NYADA  but there'd be complications of course. I'm keeping the lid on them, as she wants NYADA  in the new fic aswell.

      Yeah. I agree. I think there'll be a few episodes before it happens, same with Spencer's story.

      Since some characters are being recycled, some songs may be recycled aswell...but perhaps used for a different character or in a different context. What are some songs from PTS, you'd like to see in my new fic?

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  • Hey Jordz :) This is the official confirmation, Glee: Paint The Sky has been cancelled.

    I didn't want to cancel it but i believe, it was just inconsistent. There were characters appearing who you think were going to have larger parts or some stories weren't carried over. But i do think as it went on, it got better, my writing got better, the characters had more depth. However, because it's taken me so long to get out of my writing block, to writing scenes, it's made me realise i don't want to write this because it feels like a'm going to begin a new Glee fan-fic.

    It will be more darker and grittier, dealing with touchy subjects and there will be more male characters for sure. I just think with PTS, the moral of the story wasn't really known. But since i think i did some things in PTS well, some storylines from the fic may crop up in the new one but they'll be handled differently and things like that.

    Characters like Spencer and Mary Lou may appear as i've grown quite fond of them :)

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    • That makes sense. I've had my own bedroom all my life, but my mum said while she was growing up she always shared it with her sister. It does sound like you have a big family. I only have a younger sister, and my parents obviously, so I have a pretty small family.

      I didn't read the book either. I still haven't though, but I think it would be a good book to read sometime. I love Emma Watson in practically everything she's been in. :P

      Yeah, cause obviously it doesn't snow in the majority of Australia, so I would never have seen it growing up. And the state I live in has never received snow in all of history, so I don't see it happening too soon. :P And usually when we travel, we go in our Winter to escape the cold (so when we go to other countries, their seasons are generally reversed so it is summer and won't snow).

      I think it's better to do character and song pages as well. Personally though, character pages are a real pain in the neck, because you have to update their biographies every episode.

      Thanks, my birthday was great. Mum surprised me and got flavoured macaroons (which I love). We had the family come over and for dinner we got Chinese. I got an iPad mini and a few other smaller things like books, chocolates, etc. but I mostly got money from my family (which is fine though because to be honest, I've reached that age where I don't usually know what I want anymore)

      I'm not sure. I have thought about it before, because the name of The Unitards is really strange, and a name change would make the series sound a lot better. But, I've only ever thought of changing the name for season three. Because by then, the new choir would be dinstinguishable from the one shown on Glee, and a new name would just add that sense of refreshment. But yeah, I don't think I'll change their name until S3.

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    • It's not that we've got a big family, it's that we've not got a big house with enough rooms.

      I also loved Patrick. He's so perfectly cast. Even if i haven't read the book, i know it.

      That's really weird, how you've never seen snow. Well, i hope you see snow sometime.

      I'll gonna do the character pages and song pages, but i've got a few known readers who i think will help.

      Aww, that sounds so nice. I'm at that age too but i've got a list of DVD's i want, and i've crossed a few of them off already. P.S. I love Chinese food.

      My birthdays' next year and nothing's planned or anything, though i've hinted i want to see Matilda: The Musical in London, but my sister said you'd have to stay the night...but i'm not at college as it's a Saturday, so it would work out..but it's unlikely, as my birthday's are never decent.

      To be honest, i wrote that wrong and  i was asking you if i should change the name for my fan-fic. But yeah, i think you should change the name too. I'm thinking of doing it.

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  • I love the new headers for the episodes of S1. :) They look cool and more updated.

    Also...when you're online, can you respond to my other message and also read my excerpt of Ep 7. :)

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    • Yay English essays! #ImSoGladIDontHaveEnglishClassesAtTech :P

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    • Haha :P

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  • Hey. I know it's random but here's some trivia i added on the WAS page. It's details about the deleted scenes. They're before the song covers.

    Also. I've been doing some heavy planning on S3. S1 will be 22 episodes in total (the first semester of the 2012-2013 year) S2 will pick up from that after Sectionals and it'll be 13 episodes, which will include Spencer and Jessica's graduation. S3 will be 22 episodes and it's going to consist of some of the most ambitious stories yet.

    I think Glee's problem is that they tried to be more ambitious and big, but totally lost the emotional centre of most of their characters. Wheras with my fan-fic, S3 will be ambitious and explosive but it'll be the most emotional. I think it'lll be bigger things, the club is tackling not the actual scale of it.

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    • She's been busy with things but everything's okay, she's onboard and we're actually co-writing at the moment :)

      Hahaha :)

      I don't mind Santana getting a love interest but someone who keeps on her toes would be interesting. I just hope the NYC side is more linear and has a storyline following throughout. I also hope the Nationals competition is good and the songs are good because Sectionals and Regionals have beeen dissapointing.

      I actually like this - a disagreement...hmm...i get what you're saying but i think when the seniors graduated, it would have brought the club back to square one and Will could draw on past experiences to find new members (Making him a focus again?) so like a Pilot 2.0 if you will.

      I would have loved a Yale episode.

      Thanks :)

      Yay, i'm still excited.

      You'll have to see, won't you?

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    • I agree, I would like to see Santana's possible love interest to sort of be the "leading" one in the relationship, instead of Santana always being it. 

      I agree, the NY side better be more linear. S4 NY stories were really short and sharp and moved on much too quickly. I feel like season five has a lot of improvements that need to be done if they want to keep viewers.

      Ah, that actually sounds quite good now that you say it like that. Although, rumour has it that both Matthew and Jayma are leaving the show soon, which is kind of upsetting for me. I seriously feel like the show won't be the same if Will isn't directing ND. My second option would have been either Emma or Finn, but obviously Emma's leaving, and Cory has passed away (RIP Cory)

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  • Hey. Sorry for all the messages :) Have you heard Demi Lovato's new album? She released them last-night before the album's release. They're so's definetley her best album..and a Demi tribute in S2 is in the works..i can now officially confirm. It'll feature music from Don't Forget, Here We Go Again, Unbroken, Demi and even some of her Camp Rock songs. :)

    I've still not written 1x07 yet but i'm just not feeling it yet. I want to write it when i feel ready but since i've been away, i've planned SO MUCH. This season is going to be insane..and there's a special episode ahead - which i can't spoil. 1x07 is also going to be the longest episode of the season yet.

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    • I thought there would be a Winson duet and i think it would be good if Harmony and Jason had another duet, since their last one was amazing. Funny, how Jason did nothing really in the first nine episodes and then he's become such a prominent part and he's sort of the male lead to me.

      Randon but i had a storyline in my head..what if Harmony gives away her lead to Amanda again and she's asked to pick a male lead..and she says Nick. But Rex is annoyed and Amanda thinks it's because he wanted to be lead, which shocks her since he's not shown much background interest in the club..but really Rex hates the thought of Amanda and Nick spending even more time..espescially picking songs where he's in the back, swaying.

      Thanks. I don't mind about the second's just how imagined Tina to be on the cheeros (and then when she was on, it was different to how i'd pictured it) Cool, can't wait.

      I actually liked Blaine in S2, he was my favourite version but after that, i just wished they made him and Kurt - a one season thing, just like Kurt's first proper relationship as Blaine is so tiring now.

      I actually liked Adam and it's a real shame, we didn't get more than what we had. I thought he'd be something big like Brody, without being an escort or an assumed drug-dealer.

      I'm feeling nothing for the new episodes and it's annoying me, how everyone's talking about the seasons to come when we've still go this episode to finish first. None of the songs were good to me..they weren't finale-like or even Regionals material.  I would have rather had a Tina/ Blaine duet...just because Marley writes the original songs, doesn't mean she has to star in them all the time.

      I Love It was pretty auto-tuned but i see Tina/ Kitty in the photos, so i'm happy..i'm hoping the performance makes the song more listenable. HOF isn't as special as i think people are making it out to be...oh well, i hope the episode is better than what i expect.


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    • I'm actually thinking of another Harmony/Jason duet. In fact, if I'm being truly honest, at the start of the series, I was thinking of making Harmony and Jason the main couple, but then I thought that Terri would have fitted better, somehow. But I'm sort of glad I didn't go down the previous path as otherwise Winson wouldn't exist and Winter as a character would be much less developed, as Jason has played a big part in her storylines.

      I really like that idea. I'm probably going to use that. Although, it will take place in episode three, as ep 1 has many other things to sort out first, and ep 2 is obviously the episode set in the past. In fact, that works really well with the story I've already planned for ep 3, which is a bit of a Amanda/Nick/Rex story.

      Me too, i thought they would have handled Tina joining the cheerios much differently. Same with Blaine.

      S2 Blaine was my favorite too. In S3, he was okay, but soon after that was when I kinda went off him.

      I thought Adam was going to play a big part in Kurt's story, too, just like Brody, but obviously the writers had other plans. I feel like introducing Adam was a waste, because if Klaine is going to be endgame (I'm just assuming here), then what the hell is Adam going to be doing later on? Is he just going to be another character that comes and leaves straight away...

      I've hated the majority of the songs lately. They're just not good songs IMO and I barely remember any of them very much. 

      My fave song in AON, is All or Nothing. The rest were pretty average, and even Jessica Sanchez's songs were pretty bad, IMO. I Love It was sooo autotuned (or at least it sounds like it). I think ND shouldn't have chosen such recent, poppy numbers. They should have gone with completely different songs, I think. What was Mr. Schue thinking? Lol.

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