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April 12, 2012
  • I live in Australia
  • I was born on August 20
  • My occupation is Fan Fiction Writer, Student
  • I am Male
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  • Hey :) I'm replying to your message on a new board as I think the other board of ours was getting too long and taking ages to load.

    I'm not that close to this aunty, it's just upsetting because one of my other aunties who I was a lot more closer with and had more of a bond with died after cancer like eight years ago.

    I kind of get what you're saying - We do have other family but not much connection to them - we only really keep in touch with my two aunties (the one with cancer and another one) and my uncle so it's not that much when I come to think of it.

    Aww that's nice. Least that's a positive out of a negative.

    It's not too bad now, I'm mostly interacting with my friends from Level 1 but everyday, our group is interacting more and more so we'll see. I'm enjoying, thanks - except today I had a bad day. It's four days each week and in Level 1, you see, there was rarely homework except some rare occasions but I took my book home and did it out of enjoyment. This time, we have homework nearly everyday and i'm been on top of my work but this week, slightly fell behind and I was so tired yesterday and I was gonna have an early night. Instead, I decided to pull my finger out and get at least some work done, I did my artist presentation in my book, made it look all awesome and all (really proud of it and it took me four hours so nearly too midnight) and it got thumbs down by the teacher. So bummer :P

    Yeah, it's true - Glee couldn't acess Disney songs due to copyright and licensing and stuff but somehow, they've managed it with Let It Go. I think it's possibly due to the fact there's the Idina Menzel and the Demi Lovato version (with is same but with a few lyrical changes) and I don't think it's been properly confirmed which version Lea's singing...so maybe that's how they've bypassed the rules or maybe Disney gave in.

    Just keep on going, I don't think I could get invested in a new fic because i'm already way too invested in this one.

    I'm really thrilled with some of my song choices so far. I've got this season quite planned in details - I've got a document on Word that keeps expanding and expanding due to my ideas. I decided how my Season 1 finale is going to be yesterday - originally this other episode was going to be the season finale but I've added an order of more episodes so the finale's different....but it's gonna be so good. I just think I might get some flak for how promiment Marilyn (Melinda) is in the fic above some other characters.

    It's funny how you've re-named "Duet With Me" and called it "The New Harmony". Funnily enough, one of my episodes was at some point called that exact title :) 

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    • Haha, yeah, you're right. Our last board was taking forever to load for me as well, and scrolling through every reply was becoming tedious a task :P

      It's quite upsetting. I understand how you feel (this is slightly a different idea, but somewhat relates to what you were saying) because both my mum's parents died before I was born, and from what my mum says about them, they would have been amazing grandparents to me and my sister. The thing that is most upsetting is that my dad's mother, the one who has done lots of bad things to the family, and doesn't care much about us, is the one who is still alive. I know that sounds extremely bitter, but I still love my grandmother, it's just difficult to get over things that people to do you and others sometimes.

      Once again, best wishes for you and your aunty. Hopefully everything will be alright in the end.

      I know how you feel. There have been times where I have tried desperately to keep up with all my schoolwork, but it's difficult when you have so much to focus on and it's difficult work too. I've fallen behind on work a few times and I've found it very difficult to catch up to too. Also, that's a shame your teacher didn't like your work. I hate when that happens, where you truly think you've done something amazing to only be told it's not that good after all.

      That's rather strange that they've been given the rights to "Let It Go", but perhaps you're right about the versions though. Hopefully, though, Disney's just given in and we'll see a few Disney performances throughout the season (In case you haven't noticed, I like wishful thinking, haha)

      I think so. I couldn't get invested in a new fic either. Although there are many flaws throughout this fic, I have grown to love it, and especially the characters, because in a lot of ways, a lot of the storylines have been based off of experiences I have gone through/feelings I have had before, so I relate to the characters quite a lot.

      I used to have a Word document like that too. It basically housed everything and anything relating to the fic that I needed to remember. Luckily now though, most things for me are located on the wiki :P But I still have a huge document with all of the song and episode plans for future episodes too.

      I can't wait for your fic. I know it's still probably quite far off from its premiere, but I'm still really excited for it.

      Honestly, Melinda was one of my favourite characters featured in your last fic, and I would have loved to see her more, so you won't be getting any flak about including lots of her, at least from me :P Also, I think it's quite important there are a few central characters that everyone can become invested in. There's rarely shows/movies where every "main" character is as equally displayed or focused on as the others. I think that's what makes fics/stories in general exciting, where you have a few central characters you learn to love and can't wait to read about each episode, and then when other "less central" characters come in and have a story, it's just as exciting, because you're getting someone new  to look at, and a new story to enjoy. I really don't know if any of that made sense though. My apologies, it's Friday while I'm typing this, and  I just got home from a long week of school, so I'm very tired.

      That's really strange! Great minds think alike :P If you're still using the title for an episode, I can change mine, I don't mind. I actually was struggling to think of a title because this episode is sort of different to a lot of others in the sense that it doesn't really have a central theme, idea or concept most plots are based on. Like, it's kind of a bit of everything sort of episode. The title was inspired by "The New Rachel" on Glee, and my title has a few double meanings.

      On another note, Marina released her new title track named "FROOT" not that long ago. It came out at 5pm in the UK, which was midnight here in Western Australian time, so stupidly, I stayed up until midnight to hear it. Then, of course, you can't just hear a new song by one of your all-time favourite singers ONCE, so I ended up staying up until about 1 in the morning listening to it, then I feel asleep, with my earphones in :P 

      Also, before I forget (I've been meaning to ask for quite some time now), since Robin Williams portrays Winter's dad, Leo, and since he recently passed away, I'm not sure what to do. Because although this is just a fan fic, I personally think it's a bit dishonourable to act as if he is still alive and have him continue to portray Winter's father. I'm not sure whether to either:

      1) ignore the fact he has passed away and keep him alive in the fic (which I don't really want to do, because I think it's a bit harsh, but might have to).

      2) I could ignore the fact he has passed away and instead just never have the character Leo appear in the fic again.

      3) I could have Leo pass away in the series (although I don't really want to do this either, because then it just adds a whole heap of unneeded drama to the plot and it'd mean Winter would have to act differently for the next few episodes, which I'm not really in the mood to adjust to).

      4) I could provide some other reason that Leo will not appear in the series again, apart from death.

      I'm really quite puzzled about this. He's included in the next episode for the Winter storyline I have planned, but from then on, I'm not sure what to do.

      Thanks for your time. :)

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    • Hey :) To be honest, i couldn't believe at how long our board had come. We both wrote some L............ONG paragraphs. Lol :)

      I totally get what you're saying and I don't think it sounds bitter at all actually but best wishes to you and your family too. I know it might sound nasty but I've never been this close to this Aunty with cancer but nevertheless, I wouldn't want anything to happen to her and for to die from it because it's a horrible way to go and it's throat cancer. And my mum has a best friend who's now a widow because her husband died from that same cancer and it was horrific. Also, one of the reasons I want her to be okay because I don't want my mum to have to say goodbye to another sister who has died too with cancer. Do you get what I mean? And yeah, I get way too hold over on things people do.

      It's so amazing how things can turn aroud so quickly - last week, i was behind basically, i had things to do for all my four art projects. But now, i've catched up on everything and i'm in the lead in my class. I know i might get behind again but it's a good feeling for the time being. After every project, we have to do evaluations for two of our projects (one about painting and one about 3-D work) which reflect on your work and say what you like and could of done better (you've probs done them before) and most people are only starting Evaluation 1 or nearly finishing it. But i've already done both Evaluations and my teacher has seen them and said they're a Level 3/ 4 standard and it's a Level 2 course (I guess  liking writing and that you can fast-type can come in handy)

      i totally hear what you're saying. Even though you haven't seen it, some of the plot  or characters have things I've gone from or feelings I've felt. I think it's a lot better when you put yourself into your writing and characters, i think it makes them a lot relatable.

      Awww thank you. I'll keep you updating on the progress. Here's some behind the scenes info. For episode one, it's composed up of 37 scenes and I know that sounds like a big number but there not all big scenes and the first episode is just about setting the stage basically and you don't meet every character. Characters don't stop getting introduced till about episode five. Out of 37 scenes, i've completed 12 scenes so I've still got a lot to do but I know it feels like i'm taking forever but I just don't wanna rush.  As the idea of having to do 25 more scenes was scaring me, I started writing the beginning of Episode 2 and i've got 7 scenes already completed for that so i'm really happy with the progress of that one. I think i'm definetley going to multi-task writing the episodes this time as to me, I think it splits your chances of writer's block because each episode has different storylines and focuses. P.S. Episode One when it's released may be cut down  in two parts but honestly, I don't that's an organic thing to do and I don't really cutting my work in half. I know I did it with "Empty Chairs and White Roses" and "We Will Stand Tall For The People Like Us" but that's because, it sort of became two different episodes. One was much slower and one was more fast-paced and concerned more characters.

      Aww thanks - I always get so overwhelmed when people say that Melinda was their favourite or one of hers's because as much as I loved her, i don't understand why because I had big plans for her story but I cancelled the fic before it got to the good stuff. In this fic, Melinda's obviously been tweaked and her main storyline won't follow the same direction as it did in PTS because that'd be boring and she's now called Marilyn, which I prefer. I can say, even though i've only somewhat written two episodes - I think Marilyn will surprise you because she sort of comes out of nowhere and she's such a big focus and she's not even in the premiere.

      You can keep the title - A, because you took a long time to decide it. B, Your "The New Harmony" is closer than mine would be as mine's like one of the last episodes.  I like episodes with double meanings and one's that dont really have a connecting theme as it's just a different sort of storytelling. You kinda think it's a mess but I just think in real life, we all have different things in our life and sometimes they aren't linked by a theme.

      I know it wasn't an option I don't think but I'd probably say the best course of action is to probably re-cast the character because it's obvious, you'd feel dishonourable in keeping him as the portrayer and like you said, Leo plays an important part for Winter's storyline and you wouldn't want to have to change things. For some reason, when I imagined Leo - I always saw Harrison Ford in my head (don't ask me why) :)

      Likewise. :)

      P.S. So did you like FROOT? (Such a weird name for a song-title)

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  • Least now for Jessie 2.0. You can use songs from her first album that you didn't use in "A Win?" and songs from her second album "Alive" and her recently released third album "Sweet Talker".

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    • Yeah, I'm really happy about that! I'm yet to here her most recent album (I'm not sure if it's even out in Australia, I'll have to check). 

      Tbh though, I didn't like "Alive" as much as her first album, but it's still got heaps of great songs :) It's just a different style, I think :)

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  • Hey :) Just thought i'd drop by and give you a list of things that need to be updated on the "Season One" page.

    You need more  numbers  onto character appearences.

    You need to create  banners for the last two episodes, and add them to the page, and the seperate episode pages.

    You need to add the plot summaries for "Almost There", "We're Here!", "Christmas Time Is Here", "Promalicious", and "If We Ever Meet Again", onto the page and they're seperate episode pages.

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    • I'm really excited for the new fic too..but i just wish i could get my words out.

      Lol. She'll definetley not become Tina. The plan is for the importance of characters, whether regular or recurring, to alternate each episode...so you get a look in at each character. :)

      Wow. That's far away.

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    • Yeah, I always find I have great ideas, but writing it down is the hardest part.

      That's great! That sounds like a really good plan, I'm trying something similar with season two of my fic, to focus on particular characters each episode and alternate.

      Well, it's only about a month, but I know what you mean. :P

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  • Hiya, Jordan! Just dropping by to let you know the first episode of my fanfic has just aired. You can check it out here  :)(:

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    • WOW, that was an amazing episode! Commented on the  blog post, so if you want to see a more detailed opinion my comment is there. You have a heap of talent, Narise!! :) Loved it

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  • Hey :) I love your new profile pic, who are the two or is one of them (the male obvs) you?

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    • I'm not sure, for some reason, I thought it'd be every day.

      Yeah, it's like that here in Australia too. None of our colleges, etc. are stay overnight programs, unless they're boarding schools (obvs.) How is the grading organized at your schools in England? In Australia, we have primary school (kindergarten to grade 6 or 7 - can depend), and then high school is years 7/8 to year 12. I'm guessing it's probably similar, as Australia is a Commonwealth and has been run similarly to England in terms of government, although, we only have a prime minister, no monarchs.

      I don't think rushing the eps will be an issue. I'm kind of a perfectionist. I hate posting my eps if they aren't as good as I can make them. I know my writing isn't always brilliant, and I think that's because I kinda don't always have fully planned ideas, and sometimes I'm making things up as I go along, but honestly, I can't see myself rushing ahead being too big of an issue, because as I do like things to be the best they can be, which obviously means I take quite a while to get eps posted.

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    • No. It's a part-time course, apparently. But then again, i heard my art tutor say it was a full-time course but i think it's only 3 days, due to budget cuts, because i've heard it used to be more :)

      I really don't know the grades for Kindergarten as i've not got my thinking cap on. But at Secondary school, you're year 7 up into year 11. :)

      That is very true :) I'm really nervous about my episodes, as i really wanna start writing, but i don't wanna (if that makes sense) Because i know they're be parts which won't have any sense or i change along the way.

      You know, when you have a plot planned and then you cut it, that's what i mean :)

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  • Hey :) I'd just like to say i loved Prim and she's accepted. I know who her friend is....Siobhan a.k.a Devonne :)

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    • Thank you Jack! You're so kind! That sounds great, I'm really excited for the new series. :)

      Btw, ep 1 will be posted on Sunday 25th August. Sorry for the delays, when I planned the release date, I suppose I never thought my birthday would be so busy that i wouldn't have time to post it.

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    • You're welcome. Me too, i've not got anything written but i've got stuff planned, so..i'm good.

      Ok cool :) I'm so excited. I hope you're episodes will be more spaced out though, will they?

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  • Hey :)

    Since my fan-fic cancelled. If there's any questions you'd like to ask about how some things were planned to end or what might of become of a certain storyline, you can ask (it's dependent on whether i can fully answer, because some things will be used in the new fic) but go ahead anyway.


    For example: How would the Walker/ Beth storyline have ended up?

    My reply would be: Beth would be empowered by this, but underneath heartbroken about it. Aurora would convince her to move on to someone else, seeing as theirs’s a wide range of available guys. But Beth would realise Walker's the only one for her and get back to get together with him, setting some conditions first. He would eventually get too comfortable in the relationship, and to lay on his anger about being beat up by jocks, he'd end up beating Beth, to feel in control. You'd also of learned as a kid, he use to suffer from anorexia and he was going to have a bond with Melinda, who was going to find out about what he's doing to Beth and not liking it. She’d try and make Beth see it was wrong. After a long time, she decides enough is enough and breaks up with Walker and ends up moving with her sister, Aurora to a different state where her grandparents live...they would have been happy since her mother was having a baby.

    Then despite what she knows, Melinda would grow close to Walker and you'd expect them to be a couple but you'd be treated to a scene in the far future. It would be an older Walker (about 50) in bed, suffering from cancer (you'd learn it to be common in his family) and a married Beth would come to his beside and tell him that despite his actions to her in the past, he was the one who made her know what love was...because it was never a big thing for her, with any others before him. She'd kiss him and Walker would say, that he loves her and that he's sorry for abusing her, but not sorry for knowing her. He would say that he's not afraid of dying as he's a champion, he won her love. He might of not won her but he won her love :)

    Then he'd died and she'd cry into his chest, and say, "You're beautiful (a call-back to his first solo to her). Then like she hadn't realized, her last words would be "You're gone"

    P.S. I asked Narise a while back if i could use Winter Delgado for S2 and she said yes, so i'm using her for my new fic instead. Don't worry though, she'll be different than the Unitards counterpart :)

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    • Well, you certaintly did a goob job at hiding that intention, that's for sure. :P

      That's really sweet, and a nice little story for Demetria, Spencer and her father. Btw, does Spencer's dad have a name, and if so, what was it? I think you might have mentioned it as Anthony or Andrew or something?

      That sounds really good. How would Spencer go in NY? Would she be accepted into NYADA?

      I thought Spencer might have been bisexual. I'm not sure why, but a lot of the time, I pictured her as bi. Devonne is a bit of a shock, but not completely unrealistic or unworkable.

      I kind of do agree a little with the fact that you threw the anorexia story in a bit early. I feel in the new fic, it'd be a little better if we got to know Melinda's character (obviously with a different name though) better before the anorexia plot pops up.

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    • Lol.

      His name's Anthony.

      Yes, she would be accepted into NYADA  but there'd be complications of course. I'm keeping the lid on them, as she wants NYADA  in the new fic aswell.

      Yeah. I agree. I think there'll be a few episodes before it happens, same with Spencer's story.

      Since some characters are being recycled, some songs may be recycled aswell...but perhaps used for a different character or in a different context. What are some songs from PTS, you'd like to see in my new fic?

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  • Hey Jordz :) This is the official confirmation, Glee: Paint The Sky has been cancelled.

    I didn't want to cancel it but i believe, it was just inconsistent. There were characters appearing who you think were going to have larger parts or some stories weren't carried over. But i do think as it went on, it got better, my writing got better, the characters had more depth. However, because it's taken me so long to get out of my writing block, to writing scenes, it's made me realise i don't want to write this because it feels like a drag...so...i'm going to begin a new Glee fan-fic.

    It will be more darker and grittier, dealing with touchy subjects and there will be more male characters for sure. I just think with PTS, the moral of the story wasn't really known. But since i think i did some things in PTS well, some storylines from the fic may crop up in the new one but they'll be handled differently and things like that.

    Characters like Spencer and Mary Lou may appear as i've grown quite fond of them :)

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    • That makes sense. I've had my own bedroom all my life, but my mum said while she was growing up she always shared it with her sister. It does sound like you have a big family. I only have a younger sister, and my parents obviously, so I have a pretty small family.

      I didn't read the book either. I still haven't though, but I think it would be a good book to read sometime. I love Emma Watson in practically everything she's been in. :P

      Yeah, cause obviously it doesn't snow in the majority of Australia, so I would never have seen it growing up. And the state I live in has never received snow in all of history, so I don't see it happening too soon. :P And usually when we travel, we go in our Winter to escape the cold (so when we go to other countries, their seasons are generally reversed so it is summer and won't snow).

      I think it's better to do character and song pages as well. Personally though, character pages are a real pain in the neck, because you have to update their biographies every episode.

      Thanks, my birthday was great. Mum surprised me and got flavoured macaroons (which I love). We had the family come over and for dinner we got Chinese. I got an iPad mini and a few other smaller things like books, chocolates, etc. but I mostly got money from my family (which is fine though because to be honest, I've reached that age where I don't usually know what I want anymore)

      I'm not sure. I have thought about it before, because the name of The Unitards is really strange, and a name change would make the series sound a lot better. But, I've only ever thought of changing the name for season three. Because by then, the new choir would be dinstinguishable from the one shown on Glee, and a new name would just add that sense of refreshment. But yeah, I don't think I'll change their name until S3.

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    • It's not that we've got a big family, it's that we've not got a big house with enough rooms.

      I also loved Patrick. He's so perfectly cast. Even if i haven't read the book, i know it.

      That's really weird, how you've never seen snow. Well, i hope you see snow sometime.

      I'll gonna do the character pages and song pages, but i've got a few known readers who i think will help.

      Aww, that sounds so nice. I'm at that age too but i've got a list of DVD's i want, and i've crossed a few of them off already. P.S. I love Chinese food.

      My birthdays' next year and nothing's planned or anything, though i've hinted i want to see Matilda: The Musical in London, but my sister said you'd have to stay the night...but i'm not at college as it's a Saturday, so it would work out..but it's unlikely, as my birthday's are never decent.

      To be honest, i wrote that wrong and  i was asking you if i should change the name for my fan-fic. But yeah, i think you should change the name too. I'm thinking of doing it.

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  • I love the new headers for the episodes of S1. :) They look cool and more updated.

    Also...when you're online, can you respond to my other message and also read my excerpt of Ep 7. :)

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    • Yay English essays! #ImSoGladIDontHaveEnglishClassesAtTech :P

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    • Haha :P

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