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aka Jordan

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April 12, 2012
  • I live in The State of Dreaming
  • I was born on August 20
  • My occupation is Student
  • I am Male
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  • Hey Jordan!! Just wanted to update you on your character, Prim.

    As you know, I accepted her onto my fan-fiction and when I did, I didn't really know how to fit her in a natural way however I did say she'd be a main character.

    Now I've been writing and planning more, I've decided to make Prim a recurring character instead. I've got so much happening for the character now than I did before and she has much a bigger presence in the story. She has a big story in the earlier episodes then she's kind of absent but returns in a big way. I was originially going to have her leave after her big story but I found ways to bring her back, which keep her on but aren't forced either. Despite all this, she's still going to be a recurring character because there's lots of main characters and I feel the billing as main promises a lot of screen-time, songs, etc.

    But when I accepted this character, I only saw her as minor character to be honest but she's grown into a bigger character and I'm already thinking about her future in my fan-fiction.

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  • Hey Jordan!!! I just want to announce I should be debuting the first episode of my fan-fiction ( next week hopefully) It's going to be Part One of episode one . It won't continue weekly or anything, it's just for a teaser.

    P.S. I'm quite happy because I spoke to you about it, didn't I? About Episode One being really overlong but I didn't want to cut it into two seperate parts because there wasn't a natural place to end the first half for it to be picked up in the second half. However, after finally looking at it and having a new idea, I've added some new story elements in and I've now got the perfect cut-outt point so it's officially going to be two parts.

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  • Hey :) I'm replying to your message on a new board as I think the other board of ours was getting too long and taking ages to load.

    I'm not that close to this aunty, it's just upsetting because one of my other aunties who I was a lot more closer with and had more of a bond with died after cancer like eight years ago.

    I kind of get what you're saying - We do have other family but not much connection to them - we only really keep in touch with my two aunties (the one with cancer and another one) and my uncle so it's not that much when I come to think of it.

    Aww that's nice. Least that's a positive out of a negative.

    It's not too bad now, I'm mostly interacting with my friends from Level 1 but everyday, our group is interacting more and more so we'll see. I'm enjoying, thanks - except today I had a bad day. It's four days each week and in Level 1, you see, there was rarely homework except some rare occasions but I took my book home and did it out of enjoyment. This time, we have homework nearly everyday and i'm been on top of my work but this week, slightly fell behind and I was so tired yesterday and I was gonna have an early night. Instead, I decided to pull my finger out and get at least some work done, I did my artist presentation in my book, made it look all awesome and all (really proud of it and it took me four hours so nearly too midnight) and it got thumbs down by the teacher. So bummer :P

    Yeah, it's true - Glee couldn't acess Disney songs due to copyright and licensing and stuff but somehow, they've managed it with Let It Go. I think it's possibly due to the fact there's the Idina Menzel and the Demi Lovato version (with is same but with a few lyrical changes) and I don't think it's been properly confirmed which version Lea's maybe that's how they've bypassed the rules or maybe Disney gave in.

    Just keep on going, I don't think I could get invested in a new fic because i'm already way too invested in this one.

    I'm really thrilled with some of my song choices so far. I've got this season quite planned in details - I've got a document on Word that keeps expanding and expanding due to my ideas. I decided how my Season 1 finale is going to be yesterday - originally this other episode was going to be the season finale but I've added an order of more episodes so the finale's different....but it's gonna be so good. I just think I might get some flak for how promiment Marilyn (Melinda) is in the fic above some other characters.

    It's funny how you've re-named "Duet With Me" and called it "The New Harmony". Funnily enough, one of my episodes was at some point called that exact title :) 

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    • Hi Jack, sorry for not responding for A LONG TIME! Before I properly reply to your response, I need to warn you, this will be a VERY LONG POST, because I need to be honest with you about a few things...

      Firstly, I'm cancelling my fan fic. I know it may seem really abrupt, disappointing & anticlimatic, but surely you'd be kidding yourself if you didn't see this coming, right? I mean, I only put out one episode in 2013, and one in 2014, and I haven't put any out since July 2014. I've been thinking about it for some time now, and I kept saying "No, just keep working on it" but I've come to a final decision and I don't want to work on it anymore.

      Here are the reasons why:

      1) I just have so little time to run it anymore. I get so much schoolwork & I never can manage time to write/plan/edit the fan fic anymore. I have exams this year & I really need to focus on them, especially for Maths, because I SUCK at Maths and if I don't concentrate and focus on what's important I'm going to fail....

      2) I'm not in a good place right now to be honest. There's a lot of s*** going on in my life & I'm struggling to deal with all of this. I'll post about this further down since I don't want to cram up this section.

      3) I've lost the passion I used to have regarding this series. I used to think about this wiki and the fan fic ALL the time, but now it only crosses my mind occassionaly. It's sad to say, but I just don't get excited to write for this series anymore. I open up a Word document & it feels like a chore, like I'm about to write another essay for an English class or something. I'm uninspired & I don't know 100% where I want to go with it all.

      4) I finished the next episode & I was intending on posting it, but it's TERRIBLE. There is no excitement, drama, action. Nothing worth wasting anybody's time reading. The song selections barely matched the plot & the plot was just lacking in so many areas. 

      5) I noticed that a lot of the plots I had planned got VERY dark. Topics like suicide, death, disease, abandonment (is that a word?!) were being introduced into the series, and I don't like this, considering Glee is meant to be a relatively lighthearted series. I know I could just scrap a lot of these ideas, but without them, I'd have very little ideas left for the series.

      6) No one even reads the fic anymore apart from you and perhaps occasionally Hinton.

      7) I'm not consistent with posting.

      I know these might sound like stupid excuses, and I know you are probably annoyed because you've invested a lot of your time into reading my fic & getting to know all the characters and whatnot, but I hope that you can understand that I have run out of good ideas & I just have lost the desire to continue the fan fic, and if I'm not excited about what I'm writing, it won't turn out very good in the end. 

      I'm thinking of summarising each episode briefly, explaining what I had planned to happen in each episode, because it'd be very anticlimatic if you never found out what happened to all the characters & the story! So keep an eye out for that, I might copy & paste my brief episode summaries from my Word document onto the wiki soon, and alter a few things to explain it a bit better.

      I'll reply to your response in a second, but first I just wanted to elaborate on what I meant above about being in a bad place right now...

      I'm hesitant to say this, but I'm only as straight as a circle (hopefully you understand what this means :P) and I'm scared to tell anyone in my life, because I feel like no one will understand. And at school (since I go to a Catholic school), there are lots of people who are "anti-gay" and in our Religion classes, we did a Sexuality unit, and we are being taught about how heterosexuality is the only "normal" form of a loving relationship & that any other type of relationship is "sinful" and "immoral" and it just bothers me & offends me, because it is so against what I stand for. I think most of my friends would be OK with my orientation, but there are some that I don't want to lose because they mean so much to me and I don't want to be judged. And I only have a small group of friends at school (because for some reason there are more people at my school who hate me than like me, so it's hard to make friends with people because everyone's already excluded me and casted me away) so I don't want to lose some of the few that I DO have.

      + On top of this, my great aunty's doctor has told us that her chances of her cancer treatment being successful is low, which scares me. Because I don't want to lose her... There's not much family left in my life anymore. My other great aunty just moved away to Melbourne, my grandma is a foul bitch and she's done lots of bad things to our family, all my other grandparents have passed away, and the rest of my family I haven't seen for a long time & don't know anything about because they live in other parts of the world. All that's left is my parents, sister, aunty, uncle & two cousins under 10 who have just started school.

      Anyway, sorry for ranting, I'm just not in the best place right now and I don't really have anyone to talk to about all this, so sometimes when there is someone I feel comfortable talking to, I just blurt everything out. Don't worry about forming a long reply, there's probably not much to say. Anyhow, on with my replies to your post:

      I know what you mean, we're often critical and analytical of our own work and often hate what we create, but when somebody else something, we love it because we just accept it for what it is.

      I know that it might not be here for a while, but I am really excited to read your fan fic. It honestly used to make my day coming home from school or waking up in the morning seeing that a new episode of your fan fic had been posted! 

      Speaking of Marina, her entire album FROOT leaked, and two months before it was supposed to be sold! I feel really sorry for her. I hope her fans don't cancel their preorders just because they've got the leaks now, I know I certainly won't!

      I agree, P!nk is so versatile and can adapt her voice to suit so many different styles/genres/moods, which is what I love about her! And I agree, I think she's definitely doing better than Britney or Christina now. Britney's last album "Britney Jean" was a total flop, in my opinion.

      And sure, I can do an apple cover! But what would you like as the text/background? (Reminder that there's a link up above, to the blog I made a while ago with my cover arts)

      Again, I'm SO sorry for cancelling my fic & for this extremely long reply, I just felt that I had a lot to catch you up on & I needed to be honest with you. I'll post the summaries of each episode soon, so stay tuned! :)

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    • Hi, it’s so nice to hear from you again.

      I’m really sad to hear this but not just because I REALLY loved your fic and you’re cancelling it but the fact you’ve lost your passion for writing. Writing’s meant to be therapeutic and it’s sad when this happens…don’t think about what you were going to put out, think about what you did put out. What you put out was really good and I can’t speak for anyone else but myself. I really enjoyed reading it, the characters were good, the storylines were good and you’re a good writer so I hope you don’t totally give up on writing. I understand what you mean though with not having any time, I’ve been the same and I keep doing the same thing, opening that word document up and nothing coming to mind. I’m not sad about the fan-fiction being cancelled because I don’t want you to put your all time into something when that time can be spent on your exams so don’t sweat it and it’s annoying that your readership went down because that could’ve worked out to be an incentive. But I’m not one too dwell but just don’t’ think about or regret your decision because you’ve made the right one. 

      I’d be very interested to hear your summaries of each episode and or maybe just a paragraph on how it was going to end like you said, but only when you find the time and not before. And about that episode you wrote, only release it if you feel comfortable with it. I’m not going to put pressure on you.  I 100% understand your reasons and I don’t’ hate you for it.

      I totally know what you mean on you only being as straight as a circle and I’m in the same boat.  And I’m sorry but I don’t have any advice to impart but I understand your frustrations and it’s scary to think about and that’s why I don’t think about it too much. I don’t have any friends really, the only ones are at college and I don’t consider them “friend-friends”, just people I talk to and socialise there (like I don’t meet up with them outside of college) and I don’t know how they’d react. My male cousin who my friends know only because he was on my previous course came out as bisexual and they were surprised but the girl I’m closest to said it doesn’t bother her. But I don’t know if that’s just because she’s not close to him, like if it was I, would all that apply. + There’s a lesbian on our course and they accept her but there always seems to be an imbalance. Like people accept lesbians but don’t accept gays or people accept gays but don’t accept lesbians. It’s always irked me because I don’t understand how you can accept one but not the other. I’m also very close to my older sister but she can be homophobic. Also, when Sam Smith was on TV winning his awards, he thanked the man who broke-up with him because it inspired his album and my mum said “It just sound s wrong hearing a man say that”. So I’m quite boxed in aswell so I apologise for not being any help but I know you were hesitant, me too but it’s nice to know you can trust me with this.

      I really hope your great aunty comes round for all of your sakes. No more tragedy is necessary. I don’t want to say a lot on this because I don’t want to say the wrong thing or put my foot in it but sometimes you think it’s going to go one way but you get a surprise and a miracle does happen and it goes the other way.

      I don’t want to reply to the replies you gave to the things I said because that was ages ago but I don’t know if you’re still interested. But I’m still writing my fan-fiction, slowly but surely. I don’t know when it’ll be released but I hope I’ve still got a reader in you.

      I’ve completed the second episode. The first episode is a quarter completed and I’m already working on the third and fourth episode.

      And I just want to share the songlist for the first episode –

      • I Like It / The Only Girl In The World by Enrique Iglesias / Rihanna.
      • Slip by Stooshe.
      • Trouble by P!nk.
      • Touch Me (I Want Your Body) by Samantha Cox.
      • Never Had A Dream Come True by S Club 7.
      • Almost There from The Princess and The Frog.
      • Schadenfreude from Avenue Q.
      • Hair from Hair.
      • The Nicest Kids In Town from Hairspray.
      • People Like Us by Kelly Clarkson.

      Tell me your honest opinion on the songlist. Also, if you want to know the songlist for either episode 2, 3 or 4 or all of them. Let me know and I have no problem in sharing what songs are happening.

      Just want to end with; it’s so nice to hear from you again, even under the circumstances. It’s been a long time coming J

      P.S. I’ve not read what I’ve written so I KNOW I made some errors.

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  • Least now for Jessie 2.0. You can use songs from her first album that you didn't use in "A Win?" and songs from her second album "Alive" and her recently released third album "Sweet Talker".

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    • Yeah, I'm really happy about that! I'm yet to here her most recent album (I'm not sure if it's even out in Australia, I'll have to check). 

      Tbh though, I didn't like "Alive" as much as her first album, but it's still got heaps of great songs :) It's just a different style, I think :)

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  • Hey :) Just thought i'd drop by and give you a list of things that need to be updated on the "Season One" page.

    You need more  numbers  onto character appearences.

    You need to create  banners for the last two episodes, and add them to the page, and the seperate episode pages.

    You need to add the plot summaries for "Almost There", "We're Here!", "Christmas Time Is Here", "Promalicious", and "If We Ever Meet Again", onto the page and they're seperate episode pages.

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    • I'm really excited for the new fic too..but i just wish i could get my words out.

      Lol. She'll definetley not become Tina. The plan is for the importance of characters, whether regular or recurring, to alternate each you get a look in at each character. :)

      Wow. That's far away.

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    • Yeah, I always find I have great ideas, but writing it down is the hardest part.

      That's great! That sounds like a really good plan, I'm trying something similar with season two of my fic, to focus on particular characters each episode and alternate.

      Well, it's only about a month, but I know what you mean. :P

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  • Hiya, Jordan! Just dropping by to let you know the first episode of my fanfic has just aired. You can check it out here  :)(:

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    • WOW, that was an amazing episode! Commented on the  blog post, so if you want to see a more detailed opinion my comment is there. You have a heap of talent, Narise!! :) Loved it

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  • Hey :) I love your new profile pic, who are the two or is one of them (the male obvs) you?

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    • I'm not sure, for some reason, I thought it'd be every day.

      Yeah, it's like that here in Australia too. None of our colleges, etc. are stay overnight programs, unless they're boarding schools (obvs.) How is the grading organized at your schools in England? In Australia, we have primary school (kindergarten to grade 6 or 7 - can depend), and then high school is years 7/8 to year 12. I'm guessing it's probably similar, as Australia is a Commonwealth and has been run similarly to England in terms of government, although, we only have a prime minister, no monarchs.

      I don't think rushing the eps will be an issue. I'm kind of a perfectionist. I hate posting my eps if they aren't as good as I can make them. I know my writing isn't always brilliant, and I think that's because I kinda don't always have fully planned ideas, and sometimes I'm making things up as I go along, but honestly, I can't see myself rushing ahead being too big of an issue, because as I do like things to be the best they can be, which obviously means I take quite a while to get eps posted.

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    • No. It's a part-time course, apparently. But then again, i heard my art tutor say it was a full-time course but i think it's only 3 days, due to budget cuts, because i've heard it used to be more :)

      I really don't know the grades for Kindergarten as i've not got my thinking cap on. But at Secondary school, you're year 7 up into year 11. :)

      That is very true :) I'm really nervous about my episodes, as i really wanna start writing, but i don't wanna (if that makes sense) Because i know they're be parts which won't have any sense or i change along the way.

      You know, when you have a plot planned and then you cut it, that's what i mean :)

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  • Hey :) I'd just like to say i loved Prim and she's accepted. I know who her friend is....Siobhan a.k.a Devonne :)

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    • Thank you Jack! You're so kind! That sounds great, I'm really excited for the new series. :)

      Btw, ep 1 will be posted on Sunday 25th August. Sorry for the delays, when I planned the release date, I suppose I never thought my birthday would be so busy that i wouldn't have time to post it.

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    • You're welcome. Me too, i've not got anything written but i've got stuff planned, so..i'm good.

      Ok cool :) I'm so excited. I hope you're episodes will be more spaced out though, will they?

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  • Hey :)

    Since my fan-fic cancelled. If there's any questions you'd like to ask about how some things were planned to end or what might of become of a certain storyline, you can ask (it's dependent on whether i can fully answer, because some things will be used in the new fic) but go ahead anyway.

    For example: How would the Walker/ Beth storyline have ended up?

    My reply would be: Beth would be empowered by this, but underneath heartbroken about it. Aurora would convince her to move on to someone else, seeing as theirs’s a wide range of available guys. But Beth would realise Walker's the only one for her and get back to get together with him, setting some conditions first. He would eventually get too comfortable in the relationship, and to lay on his anger about being beat up by jocks, he'd end up beating Beth, to feel in control. You'd also of learned as a kid, he use to suffer from anorexia and he was going to have a bond with Melinda, who was going to find out about what he's doing to Beth and not liking it. She’d try and make Beth see it was wrong. After a long time, she decides enough is enough and breaks up with Walker and ends up moving with her sister, Aurora to a different state where her grandparents live...they would have been happy since her mother was having a baby.

    Then despite what she knows, Melinda would grow close to Walker and you'd expect them to be a couple but you'd be treated to a scene in the far future. It would be an older Walker (about 50) in bed, suffering from cancer (you'd learn it to be common in his family) and a married Beth would come to his beside and tell him that despite his actions to her in the past, he was the one who made her know what love was...because it was never a big thing for her, with any others before him. She'd kiss him and Walker would say, that he loves her and that he's sorry for abusing her, but not sorry for knowing her. He would say that he's not afraid of dying as he's a champion, he won her love. He might of not won her but he won her love :)

    Then he'd died and she'd cry into his chest, and say, "You're beautiful (a call-back to his first solo to her). Then like she hadn't realized, her last words would be "You're gone"

    P.S. I asked Narise a while back if i could use Winter Delgado for S2 and she said yes, so i'm using her for my new fic instead. Don't worry though, she'll be different than the Unitards counterpart :)

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    • Well, you certaintly did a goob job at hiding that intention, that's for sure. :P

      That's really sweet, and a nice little story for Demetria, Spencer and her father. Btw, does Spencer's dad have a name, and if so, what was it? I think you might have mentioned it as Anthony or Andrew or something?

      That sounds really good. How would Spencer go in NY? Would she be accepted into NYADA?

      I thought Spencer might have been bisexual. I'm not sure why, but a lot of the time, I pictured her as bi. Devonne is a bit of a shock, but not completely unrealistic or unworkable.

      I kind of do agree a little with the fact that you threw the anorexia story in a bit early. I feel in the new fic, it'd be a little better if we got to know Melinda's character (obviously with a different name though) better before the anorexia plot pops up.

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    • Lol.

      His name's Anthony.

      Yes, she would be accepted into NYADA  but there'd be complications of course. I'm keeping the lid on them, as she wants NYADA  in the new fic aswell.

      Yeah. I agree. I think there'll be a few episodes before it happens, same with Spencer's story.

      Since some characters are being recycled, some songs may be recycled aswell...but perhaps used for a different character or in a different context. What are some songs from PTS, you'd like to see in my new fic?

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  • Hey Jordz :) This is the official confirmation, Glee: Paint The Sky has been cancelled.

    I didn't want to cancel it but i believe, it was just inconsistent. There were characters appearing who you think were going to have larger parts or some stories weren't carried over. But i do think as it went on, it got better, my writing got better, the characters had more depth. However, because it's taken me so long to get out of my writing block, to writing scenes, it's made me realise i don't want to write this because it feels like a'm going to begin a new Glee fan-fic.

    It will be more darker and grittier, dealing with touchy subjects and there will be more male characters for sure. I just think with PTS, the moral of the story wasn't really known. But since i think i did some things in PTS well, some storylines from the fic may crop up in the new one but they'll be handled differently and things like that.

    Characters like Spencer and Mary Lou may appear as i've grown quite fond of them :)

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    • That makes sense. I've had my own bedroom all my life, but my mum said while she was growing up she always shared it with her sister. It does sound like you have a big family. I only have a younger sister, and my parents obviously, so I have a pretty small family.

      I didn't read the book either. I still haven't though, but I think it would be a good book to read sometime. I love Emma Watson in practically everything she's been in. :P

      Yeah, cause obviously it doesn't snow in the majority of Australia, so I would never have seen it growing up. And the state I live in has never received snow in all of history, so I don't see it happening too soon. :P And usually when we travel, we go in our Winter to escape the cold (so when we go to other countries, their seasons are generally reversed so it is summer and won't snow).

      I think it's better to do character and song pages as well. Personally though, character pages are a real pain in the neck, because you have to update their biographies every episode.

      Thanks, my birthday was great. Mum surprised me and got flavoured macaroons (which I love). We had the family come over and for dinner we got Chinese. I got an iPad mini and a few other smaller things like books, chocolates, etc. but I mostly got money from my family (which is fine though because to be honest, I've reached that age where I don't usually know what I want anymore)

      I'm not sure. I have thought about it before, because the name of The Unitards is really strange, and a name change would make the series sound a lot better. But, I've only ever thought of changing the name for season three. Because by then, the new choir would be dinstinguishable from the one shown on Glee, and a new name would just add that sense of refreshment. But yeah, I don't think I'll change their name until S3.

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    • It's not that we've got a big family, it's that we've not got a big house with enough rooms.

      I also loved Patrick. He's so perfectly cast. Even if i haven't read the book, i know it.

      That's really weird, how you've never seen snow. Well, i hope you see snow sometime.

      I'll gonna do the character pages and song pages, but i've got a few known readers who i think will help.

      Aww, that sounds so nice. I'm at that age too but i've got a list of DVD's i want, and i've crossed a few of them off already. P.S. I love Chinese food.

      My birthdays' next year and nothing's planned or anything, though i've hinted i want to see Matilda: The Musical in London, but my sister said you'd have to stay the night...but i'm not at college as it's a Saturday, so it would work out..but it's unlikely, as my birthday's are never decent.

      To be honest, i wrote that wrong and  i was asking you if i should change the name for my fan-fic. But yeah, i think you should change the name too. I'm thinking of doing it.

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